Wednesday, April 8, 2009

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Commentary: Streaking

Have you ever wondered what it felt like to run down the streets in your boxers? The students in America are probably able to answer this question. Why? The student traditions in America colleges and universities involve streaking. It is regarded as an annual event for them to do so. Students who do this are most probably trying to relieve stress or just for the fun of it. This essay shall discuss if streaking should be banned.

3 comments:

  1. Nice intro..^.^ INTERESTING..
    I should learn more from you..

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  2. This introduction is very informative even though it doesn't spam facts. Can see a very clear thesis statement. Good job =))

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  3. I agree. Yours is simple but very well done. The link between sentences flow very well, especially the part about the students in America being able to relate to it. Great job.

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